Music Video Pitch Feedback:

1. From reading our first peice of feedback from the audience we expressed our pitch too, this is one of the most positivie of them all. They believed that our idea was original, unique and most of all entropic and amplyfying, for example the use of morph suits in unusual, biritsh locations have not really been looked at and expessed thourgouly in the music industry. The general outlook of this anonymous feedback was that our whole video is going to be exciting and well worth watching. They expressed that the only improvement that could be made, is the clearaty of our target audience- for example we tried to balnce it between an rock song with quite an indie/pop strucutre of music video and features. I believe that if we try and focus more on the indie side rather than pop, this will give us greater feedback and hopefully more pleasure. The fact that our target audience were going to start ranging from 18+ suggests that featuring quite a 'poppy' side may be a bit unneccesaey seeing as most late teenagers are into their own style of music genre, and in this case Indie.

2. Our seccond peice of feeback was unfortunately not as succesful. Although they enjoyed and apriecated our idea and outlook, they suggested we needed to include a more 'idividulistic' idea, rather than copying most non mainstream indie videos, for example 4 boys walking round a public field dressed in abnormal clothing. Although most of their feedbcak was mostley negative, they enjoyed the idea of us not following Goodwin's theory of women represented as sexual objects. I believe that this feedback will help us in achieveing a better peice of work as we most definately need some bad feedback in order to make our final peice as succesful as possible.